Outline
I. Introduction
a) Slums are the harm of the environment
b) Slums are dirty unstable neighborhoods with polluted water
c) The slums can be a burden to the community by taking too much space
d) The slums are not the problem though it’s the economy
II. Defendable point 1
a) Slums aren’t the problem it’s the economy
b) With no money, trash will build and slums will rise
c) The economy might charge too much the people can’t pay for
d) Unless the economy can’t straighten up the, slums will keep coming, while being un healthy
III. Defendable point 2
a) With in the slums are poor people who are forced to live in unstable homes
b) Many people in the slums can not afford houses due to the economy
c) So the people have to use weak wood, dirty tarps, and rusty metal to make houses
d) That’s not all, the food is inedible
IV. Defendable point 3
a) No edible food can make you weak, ill, and hungry for good food
b) Slum people must look for scraps and water (polluted)
c) The trash every where makes it hard to farm
d) So if the slums can’t help us, then why do we have them
V. Conclusion
a) Slums are the harm of the environment
b) The slums can be a burden to the community by taking space